The Harbinger’s Path: Ch3 Updates & Previews Archive | September 29, 2025

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Partial comic page crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Guild Wars 2 Trahearne & Malyck fan comic. Shows Trahearne laying upside-down surrounded by cyan ley energy. Text reads as follows: 1) "The renowned Pact Marshal could save none of them!" 2) The Jungle Dragon is grateful - even in your futile attempt to resist- 3) -you have already helped him the most of all his children.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 1, page crop

September 28, 2025: Chapter 3 Launch

Chapter 3: Mordremoth’s Favor begins updating today! Starting with page 1, which is this chapter’s title page.

Posting a little earlier today since I’ll be out(side) for most of tomorrow, and unsure I’d have time to update the site upon returning.


Chapter 3, page 1 preview crop! 

Here I’ll begin logging all of chapter 3’s page previews!  This is mostly for myself, because it was convenient having a single post with all of chapter 2’s page previews I ended up posting to socials. It saved a lot of time having that post to reference for posts to more than one platform (because I am still stubborn about not using bulk posting tools). I also wouldn’t have been able to be as diligent with alt text otherwise. 

It always surprises me how much time these small posts to socials sometimes end up taking me – having this sketchblog to reference this year has made it so much more manageable. One of the reasons why I’ve been able to be more active this year, compared to some years prior. 

Plus, I think it’s sorta nifty seeing the chapter at a glance, after the chapter finishes and all the previews will be below. 


Comic page crop showing a glimpse of Caladbolg, the mythical sylvari blade. Text reads: "... And the success of your Wyld Hunt." "Firstborn-"
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 2, page crop

October 1, 2025: Chapter 3, page 2

Ch3, Page 2 now up!

The second half of this two-page chapter-opener spread!

Next Monday’s page has a mild advisory for violence. It is nothing graphic, and doesn’t go beyond what you’d see in a Star Wars movie.

I’ll mention this again for page 3’s update, but wanted to give a heads-up viewer discretion advisory. I’ve also added content descriptions for “fantasy violence” and “suggestive themes” to the comic’s existing PG-13 rating (at the top of this index page). It’s important to me that you have a general sense of what to expect in the comic, and are not unpleasantly surprised by something unexpected (of course, I do aspire to pleasantly surprise you!).

Thanks as always for being here, and I hope you’re enjoying Chapter 3!

Next page on Monday. Enjoy your week and weekend, and the first day of October!


Panel crop showing a close-up of Malyck's face looking down toward the viewer. Text read: "-why do you still resist?"
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 3, panel crop

October 6, 2025: Chapter 3, page 3

Ch3, Page 3 now up.

Malyck seems upset!

As mentioned in the previous update, mild advisory for violence for this page. Again, nothing graphic or beyond what you’d see in a Star Wars movie. But please use your discretion, as it might be considered a little more intense than previous pages.

Next page on Wednesday!


Malyck from Guild Wars 2 looking furiously toward the camera.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 4, panel crop

October 8, 2025: Chapter 3, page 4

Ch3, Page 4 now up!

How considerate of Trahearne! Hopefully, his words aren’t wasted effort.

Next page on Monday, enjoy yourself in the meantime!


Comic panel crop of Malyck from Guild Wars 2. Portrait crop. As he smirks toward Trahearne off-camera, text reads: "....Have you wondered - why I remain in this form?"
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 5, panel crop

October 13, 2025: Chapter 3, page 5

Ch3, Page 5 now up!

I’ve been anticipating when I could finally show this page! Malyck brings up a few points here that I was eager to portray in the comic.

I suspect the point he mentions in panel 3 might be a smaller detail within the wider scope of things – but it’s one that’s important to me within the comic’s context. I always knew I wanted him to address it somewhere.

Malyck’s choice words for “Nightmare Commanders” is also one of the more overt indicators this is a headcanon story – it’s a very old callback to the original concept art Caryln Lim created during Heart of Thorns development! In those artworks, what we know as the “Mordrem Guard Commanders” in the canon story, were described as “Nightmare Court Commanders” in those earlier concepts.

Next page on Wednesday!

*Edit: Made slight touch-ups to this page later during the same day. 


Comic panel crop showing Malyck from Guild Wars 2 holding the tip of his "Crying Thorn" dagger to Trahearne's throat.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 6, panel crop

October 15, 2025: Chapter 3, page 6

Ch3, Page 6 now up!

This page touches upon one of my favorite fan interpretations/speculations – the one involving Trahearne’s “last order.”

The way the canon story treats this event always left me wanting more exposition. Possibly because, during the lead-up to Heart of Thorns’ original release, a few fan theories were floated around. A certain one lit up my imagination, and has remained my headcanon ever since!

There have been a few hints this chapter about which theory it is. I’ll be curious if you can predict it!

Next page on Monday, enjoy your week/end! 

*Edit: Made slight touch-ups to this page later during the same day. 


Comic panel crop showing Malyck from Guild Wars 2 holding his "Crying Thorn" dagger as he sneers down toward the viewer.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 7, panel crop

October 20, 2025: Chapter 3, page 7

Ch3, Page 7 now up!

The fourth panel of this page is a callback from quite a while ago! I hope it’s recognizable.

Next page on Wednesday!

Did you know this Thursday is Heart of Thorn’s 10-year anniversary?


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Malyck from Guild Wars 2. He's in an active pose looking off-camera. We see a glimpse of the back of Trahearne's arm in the background, in a separate panel.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 8, panel crop

October 22, 2025: Chapter 3, page 8

Ch3, Page 8 now up!

With this page, I have to remind you to please trust me that I admire these characters – whatever I put them through, there is intent behind it that will have payoff later. This will (hopefully) be clear when reading the pages together. I really only have to note this now because you can’t yet turn to the next page.

Speaking of, next page on Monday! Enjoy contemplating what the next page might be until then. ;D

Tomorrow is Heart of Thorn’s 10-year anniversary! 10 years we’ve had to wonder what happened to Malyck! When I began the comic early this year, I did not realize 2025 was HoT’s 10-year anniversary. I realized after starting. As I continued drawing, it felt quite fitting. This comic, among other things, is an expression of the fondness I feel toward that original expansion, and all involved in its development – and drawing it during its 10-year anniversary year seems an appropriate way to celebrate this!

*Edit: Added edits to this page later during the same day. I had forgotten to add Trahearne’s thorns! I was enjoying drawing his pose too much, perhaps. ;p 


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Malyck from Guild Wars 2. He's in the distance, a massive nest of vined thorns behind him. Wisps of smoke - the color of ley-line energy - billows from his pistol's muzzle.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 9, panel crop

October 27, 2025: Chapter 3, page 9

Ch3, Page 9 now up!

What a relief! Trahearne seems okay – or does he?

Advisory for sylvari “sap blood” this page. If you saw the previous page, this likely isn’t surprising. In my opinion, the depiction leans more “artistic” than “violent” – but as this is subjective, please use your discretion for your personal comfort level.

Next page on Wednesday!

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For Heart of Thorns’ 10th anniversary last Thursday, I also made two things to celebrate – both related to this comic! A Trahearne and Malyck 2D animation, and a small addition to an earlier page of the comic, which I remarked I might do back over the summer. I haven’t mentioned I added this addition anywhere yet – a little mystery, but I’ll mention it soon. I applaud your diligence if you find it earlier!

*Edit: Touched-up this page later during the same day – I had less time this weekend than expected. I also had trouble cropping this one in a way that worked for socials, while also not spoiling the page. I ended up taking some extra time to clean-up parts of the art underneath the speech balloons hidden in this crop. I normally don’t do this, because thinking of the speech balloons as part of the page helps me to think of the page as a “comic page” and not an “illustration,” if this makes sense. 

But I’m pretty proud of this page, and I think it’s an important one for the comic, especially after page 8. I think it warranted a little special treatment! 


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Trahearne from Guild Wars 2. He's reclined on the ground with luminous, amber-colored "sap-blood" surrounding him. His smirk is both vaguely threatening and somewhat inscrutable.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 10, panel crop

October 29, 2025: Chapter 3, page 10

Ch3, Page 10 now up!

Are you certain your mind is clear, Pact Marshal?

Next page on Monday, enjoy your time in Castora in the meantime!

*Edit: Added slight touch-ups to this page the same day. 


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Malyck from Guild Wars 2. He glares moodily off-camera.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 11, panel crop

November 2, 2025: Chapter 3, page 11

Ch3, Page 11 now up!

Oh dear, Malyck seems agitated.

Next page on Wednesday. Hope you enjoyed your Halloween!


Comic panel crop showing a background with large, thorned vines in the environment. The small figure of Malyck can be seen viewing the scene, overlooking the thorny vines.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 12, panel crop

November 5, 2025: Chapter 3, page 12

Ch3, Page 12 now up!

Poor Malyck!

Next page on Monday! Enjoy your week/ends!


Comic panel crop showing a defiant Trahearne clutching his chest, which glows with amber sylvari "sap" blood.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 13, panel crop

November 9, 2025: Chapter 3, page 13

Ch3, Page 13 now up!

Always the scholar, Pact Marshal.

If you need a reminder for what the first line on this page is referring to, flip back to the previous page (pg 12)!

Next page on Wednesday!


November 12, 2025: Chapter 3, page 14

Ch3, Page 14 now up!

Why do you think so, Malyck?

Next page on Monday, enjoy the rest of your week and weekend!

Two preview crops to archive here. I’m a bit between the two, but I’ll probably go with the Trahearne version. 


Comic panel crop showing Trahearne staring fiercely at the camera.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 15, panel crop

November 17, 2025: Chapter 3, page 15

Ch3, Page 15 now up!

I was between glint or glimmer there in early drafts – but the choice was obvious, wasn’t it?

Next page on Wednesday!


November 19, 2025: Chapter 3, page 16

Ch3, Page 16 now up!

Aha, the return of the “fan speculation/theory” mentioned way back on page 6 ‘s update for this chapter, last month on Oct 15! (The link there goes to the archive for that page’s update, if you’re curious to read it and compare with today’s page.)

Next page on Monday! I hope this slightly longer chapter has been pleasant to read compared to the two earlier chapters – it’s certainly a pleasure having an excuse to draw even more Trahearne and Malyck this year. :D

Similar to the November 12 update, two preview crops to archive here. The version featuring both of them would probably be more ideal, but I was shorter on time for this week’s pages, and don’t think this panel is refined enough to show on its own as a preview crop. 


Comic panel crop showing Malyck placing his hand against Trahearne's chest. Trahearne looks displeased as he glows at the physical contact.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 17, panel crop

November 24, 2025: Chapter 3, page 17

Ch3, Page 17 now up!

A question I’ve always wondered, and that I like to think Trahearne wondered, as well. I wish we could have seen him learn the answer.

The potential for what was teased in Heart of Thorns’ launch trailer seems to live rent-free in my mind at this point. :p (If you’re not clear on what I’m referring to, watch the opening lines of that 10-year(!) old trailer after reading to the final line of this page, especially coupled with the previous page 16.)

Next page on Wednesday!


Comic panel crop showing Malyck placing his hand against Trahearne's jawline.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 18, panel crop

November 26, 2025: Chapter 3, page 18

Ch3, Page 18 now up!

How insidious of Mordremoth!

Next page on Monday! Have a wonderful rest of your week and weekend!


Comic panel crop showing Cadeyrn smirking down toward the viewer.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 19, panel crop

December 1, 2025: Chapter 3, page 19

Ch3, Page 19 now up!

This page references one of my absolute favorite quotes from the game – said by Cadeyrn to the Pale Tree:

“Let me destroy the tablet, and we will see what it truly means to be sylvari.” (Source: “Dream and Nightmare”)

I tried with the original “destroy,” but “smash” seemed to read more naturally for this page when I read it back to myself. But let me know if the difference distracts you. I was between the two, and am open to changing it if the difference detracts!

Next page on Wednesday. Happy December!

*Edit: Added slight touch-ups to this page the same day. I couldn’t resist adding a little more to Cadeyrn. :p 


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Malyck from Guild Wars 2 surrounded by many twisting, thorned vines.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 20, panel crop

December 3, 2025: Chapter 3, page 20

Ch3, Page 20 now up!

“He is my first.”

Next page on Monday, have a good first week of December!

*Edit: Adjusted Malyck’s pose in the final panel the next day. 

*Edit 12/4/2025: Adjusted the “maw” in panel “3” to be more of a callback to the comic’s cover art! 


Comic panel crop showing the sylvari Malyck from Guild Wars 2 smirking slyly at the camera. Malyck's dialogue reads, "Does this surprise you, Firstborn?"
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 3, page 21, panel crop

December 8, 2025: Chapter 3, page 21

Ch3, Page 21 now up!

Look who’s back!

I have a different announcement today. I was hoping I’d be able to continue the update schedule until Chapter 3’s conclusion, but I unfortunately have to put The Harbinger’s Path on a short hiatus until January 2026.

You can read more in the full announcement post here, but I’ll list the main points below.

  • Updates are tentatively planned to resume January 19, 2026.
  • This hiatus is for page updates, not page progress. I will be drawing the remaining pages during this hiatus. These next pages are more complex for me to draw, and they need more time than I unfortunately have available this month.
  • I’m very sorry about this hiatus, but I’m confident this additional time is the best decision for the comic to maintain its quality (and hopefully, your enjoyment!).

Thank you so much for reading The Harbinger’s Path this year! Truly, it means the world to me.

Please look forward to Janaury 2026 to find out what happens next with Trahearne & Malyck!

In the meantime, enjoy your holidays, Wintersday, and New Year’s! I’ll still be around on my sketchblog and socials during this time, and you are also welcome to email me about the comic if you have questions or feedback!

*Edit: Added various touch-ups the same day. 

*Edit December 10, 2025: First-pass touch-ups (added Malyck’s beard). 


Comic panel crop showing Malyck leering at Trahearne.

January 19, 2025: Chapter 3, page 22

Ch3, Page 22 now up!

And we’re back, happy new year! These next updates will cover chapter 3’s conclusion.

Also some exciting news! The Harbinger’s Path is getting a limited print run for Manga Ichiba this Fanime 2026. More in the sketchblog post if you’d like to learn more here.

Next page this Wednesday!


Comic panel crop showing Trahearne looking down toward the viewer.

 

January 21, 2025: Chapter 3, page 23

Ch3, Page 23 now up!

Stares judgmentally.

Next page on Monday! 


Comic panel crop showing Malyck glaring up toward the viewer.

January 26, 2026: Chapter 3, page 24

Ch3, Page 24 now up!

Oh no!

Next page Wednesday!


Comic panel crop showing Malyck lunging with his dagger.

 

January 28, 2026: Chapter 3, page 25

Ch3, Page 25 now up!

Some light animation on this page! Let me know if anything takes too long to load for you.

Next page Monday!

*Edit: Slight touch-ups the same day.  

*Edit January 29, 2026: Adjusted poses in the final panel. 


February 2, 2026: Chapter 3, page 26

Ch3, Page 26 now up!

Is he truly lost?

This concludes Chapter 3! Click forward on page 26 for an “author’s note” about my next plans for The Harbinger’s Path, and my next comic project. I’ll also write a summary below:

What’s next for the comic? And future plans:

  • The Harbinger’s Path: Limited Print Run
    • My main focus for The Harbinger’s Path right now is editing it for print until the book is finished (which will be by May 2026 at the latest).
    • This includes formatting all 3 chapters/55 pages (current pages were only intended for web), adding general touch-ups to the art, and creating bonus material.
    • If you’re interested in a print book, there’s an interest-check poll sent to those receiving Email Updates. The poll link is also currently sent to new sign-ups.
  • The Harbinger’s Path: Future Comic Pages
    • After the print book is finished, I’ll have a better idea for what I can do next with The Harbinger’s Path.
    • If you already receive “Email Updates” or the RSS feed, you’ll be conveniently notified when there’s something new!
  • Nightmare’s Embrace Mini-comic
    • While I’m formatting Harbinger’s print edition, this is the next comic project I plan on drawing! It involves my sylvari oc’s, and is smaller in scope than The Harbinger’s Path. I’ve been eager to try practicing a few things learned while drawing Harbinger in a shorter comic story.

*Edit: Slight touch-ups the same day. 

*Edit February 3, 2026:

  • Chose a different cropping for the preview image. Added both above!
  • Slight art touch-ups. 

Caydren Paintover | August 4, 2025

Side-profile painting of a Nightmare Court sylvari elementalist from Guild Wars 2. He has long, bare branches for hair, and a red bioluminescent glow. He wields a "Fiery Greatword" over his far shoulder.
“Spellweaver Caydren” | 2025 paintover of a 2017 painting.

Felt like doing another “paintover” practice of one of my older paintings as a warm-up today – which I inevitably spent more time on than I intended. I wouldn’t consider this a “finished” painting, but I’d considered it “finished” as far as its intended practice. :D

This is my “spellweaver” Nightmare Court sylvari from Guild Wars 2, who is one of the main characters from my not-yet-released “Nightmare’s Embrace” project (a future short comic, separate from The Harbinger’s Path Trahearne & Malyck comic). His loyalty to Nightmare is what the quote refers to – like Cadeyrn before him, he believes Nightmare represents the “true” nature of all sylvari, and that the Dream is a corrupting force separating all sylvari from their true selves. 

The full version of the original in the full post: 

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“Mist Stranger Trahearne” Paintover | July 29, 2025

Vertical portrait painting of the sylvari Trahearne from Guild Wars 2. He's wearing the hood from the "Mist Stranger" outfit. He's looking back toward to the viewer, smirking.
“Mist Stranger Trahearne” | 2025 paintover of a 2021 painting; vertical crop.

This is a 2025 practice paintover of one of my older paintings of Trahearne from 2021. I’ll put the original at the end of the post, and you can flip between them for comparison (and judge me on how much I’ve improved or not since, haha). 

I remember thinking this fan theory quite fun at the time – it is not my fan theory, and I believe I saw it mentioned on both Reddit and Tumblr occassionally, at the time. (I can’t recall if it originated from one person, or multiple people – if you happen to know, feel free to share and I’ll add this info into this post). Edit: Found some links from the time! On Tumblr and Reddit. Thanks to @scarlet-briar on Bluesky for the Tumblr info (it is their theory and Tumblr page in the link!).

Full horizontal composition of the previous vertical cropped painting. We see Trahearne's Mist Stranger-clothed glove grasping the mask from the outfit.
“Mist Stranger Trahearne” | 2025 paintover of a 2021 painting; full composition.

The general theory is that the Mist Stranger might be Trahearne, perhaps from an alternate timeline. While the idea doesn’t fit into my “headcanon” projects for The Harbinger’s Path and Nightmare’s Embrace, it’s still fun thinking about alternate possibilities people cleverly speculate on. Especially as, this one involved the possibility for the character reappearing again in-game. 

For this painting, I remember being fond of the overall composition, or perhaps the concept of the composition – but when I randomly saw the file again over the weekend, I realized the composition had some problems. Some visually awkward moments. The full version is a horizontal composition – which I think I’ve improved slightly from the original, though I still prefer it as the cropped portrait version at the top of this post, instead of the full canvas above.

The main thing I wanted to try was some of the techniques I’ve been using in The Harbinger’s Path comic pages, but applied to a painting/illustration. Quite fun! 

Below (in the full post) is the 2025 paintover, followed after by the original 2021 version for comparison: 

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The Harbinger’s Path: Chapter 2 Previews | June 30, 2025

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Comic panel crop showing Malyck beginning to stand up, surrounded by dark thorns.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 2, panel crop

I think I’ll make this post for any page previews I don’t end up making a separate post for – starting with this preview crop from chapter 2, page 3. Will add to this post as needed!

Comic panel crop showing Malyck, his raised hand partially visible. Text reads, "It is as the Jungle Dragon wishes."
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 3, panel crop

One more preview from page 3! 


July 1, 2025: Page 4 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck with his hand raised, looking downward with a taunting grin. Speech balloon reads, "It's true."
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 4, panel crop

July 7, 2025: Page 5 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck taunting Trahearne, both in side-profile view focusing on their faces.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 5, panel crop

July 9, 2025: Page 6 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck with his arm extended upward to something out-of-frame. He stands in front of an entanglement of large, thorned vines.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 6, panel crop

July 14, 2025: Page 7 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Trahearne staring defiantly upward off-camera. Glowing, amber sap runs down the far side of his face, implying prior injury.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 7, panel crop

July 16, 2025: Page 8 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Trahearne bound by an entanglement of thorns.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 8, panel crop

July 21, 2025: Page 9 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck surrounded by thorned vines circling his shoulders.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 9, panel crop

July 23, 2025: Page 10 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows a close-up of Malyck looking downward, intrigued by what he's seeing off-camera.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 10, panel crop

July 28, 2025: Page 11 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck from behind. We can see a glimpse of him holding Caladbolg, the legendary sylvari greatsword.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 11, panel crop

July 30, 2025: Page 12 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows angry Trahearne.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 12, panel crop

August 4, 2025: Page 13 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows Malyck holding Caladbolg before him.  Text in speech balloons read: "Using this blade - which by your hand-"
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 13, panel crop

August 6, 2025: Page 14 preview crop: 

Panel crop from "The Harbinger's Path" Trahearne and Malyck fan comic. Shows an angry Trahearne surrounded by vined thorns, ley-line energy teeming all around him.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 13, panel crop

The Harbinger’s Path: Ch2, page 2 Process | June 26, 2025

The sylvari Trahearne from Guild Wars 2 entangled in a nest of thorns. Text reading, "I must escape-" and "The Pact-" are written in speech balloons.
The Harbinger’s Path | Chapter 2, page 2, panel crop

This page went through a number of changes and deliberations while I worked on it, and I wanted to share some of the process and thoughts that went into it. 

First, some process steps below! The first 2 are fairly early on in the process, though further along than the “layout” step (which are barely above stick figures). This page’s ideation started with heavy silhouetting. When I initially drafted the layout for this page, Malyck was the only panel on it for a while. I went between leaving the rest of the page with negative space – either empty or filled with black – or with an establishing shot or something involving Trahearne to fill the space. 

My aim was that this part of the page should convey some time has passed since the final scene in Chapter 1. 

I wasn’t decided initially, and left the rest of the page blank and went on to do the rest of Chapter 2’s layouts. When I came back to this page later on, the idea to show Trahearne most appealed to me. It would work both to reorient ourselves with where our main character is now, as well as also serve as a bit of an establishing shot. My hope is this would also convey how the previous page is a memory – though whether by Trahearne, Malyck, or someone else, is left to interpretation. 

My other dilemma with this page involved Trahearne himself. It was important to me to convey his sense of desperation, but also his strength and resolve. The clawing vines are a visual representation of his capture, but I didn’t want to only represent his imprisonment – I want to represent his strength of will. The main question became, should I represent this visually, or through internal thoughts? 

To thought balloon or not to thought balloon

This is an interesting question. My understanding is, displaying internal thoughts for characters is a bit more archaic (at least in western comics). It was very commonplace in the old Stan Lee and Jack Kirby Marvel comics (which of the few I’ve read, I quite adore). I personally really loved the style of those old comics – including the thought balloons. I don’t know if that’s a controversial or unpopular opinion or not, among comic fans today (I am woefully out of the loop). My understanding is this has fallen out of favor with modern comics (at least, again, with more western ones). The preference being to represent character thoughts externally, through visuals, instead of through thought balloons. 

I admire this aspiration. There is incredible merit to it. My favorite webcomic, Unsounded by Ashley Cope (which has, incidentally, just launched the pre-campaign on Kickstarter for the Iron Circus Comics publication of volumes 1 & 2 – which you should very definitely consider checking out & giving the campaign a follow!), adheres to this methodology. I believe I read it in an interview Ashley gave many years ago (or it might have also been a reply to someone on Tumblr), where she explained more about her reasoning behind this. I’m going to paraphrase (forgive me), but the general sentiment I took away from it is that, if you forgo thought balloons, it very often results in much more visually interesting, impactful pages. 

For me, the easiest example to show are pages 16 and 17 from Unsounded’s first chapter. It makes more sense in-context if you read from the beginning of the chapter (which I highly recommend!), but even so, these pages are excellent examples about visually representing the internal turmoil within a character’s thoughts and mind, without any use of thought balloons. I love these pages because of how well the concept is executed here. From what I recall (and again, forgive me if I’m misremembering), Ashley is such a strong proponent of this, that I think she has mentioned before that she doesn’t use thought balloons anywhere in Unsounded – which currently sits at over 2,000+ pages in length! A mightily impressive feat, if you ask me. 

The final version for this page. We see a side-view of Trahearne at the top - his eyes obscured by the glowing leaves of his hair. Text reads: "How many days have passed?" He is encapsulated by vines, which lead the eye down the page, revealing a wider shot showing Trahearne bound in a nest of thorns. Text reads: "I must escape - the Pact-" The bottom panel shows Malyck in a reclined position, resting comfortably on one arm, Caladbolg carelessly held in his other hand. Text reads: "Mordremoth is impressed by your resolve - Pact Marshal."
Ch2, page 2 | Final version of the page

Now, all that said and all my praise for this methodology – why did I decide to use thought balloons, in the end? I also used them in The Harbinger’s Path’s first chapter, also for Trahearne. I’m sorry to say I don’t have a deep reasoning for my decision other than – despite both my awareness and admiration (and enjoyment!) for eschewing thought balloons – it’s a personal preference that I also highly enjoy them. If I had to guess, I think it may be because I grew up reading comics that used them a lot. I read mostly Japanese manga, which makes liberal use of thought balloons (at least, in the ones I read). I enjoy how it can make the character feel closer to the reader, or more intimate. It is true it’s an “easier” technique – it is far more ambitious to represent a character’s thoughts visually, and it is something I would like to attempt in the future. However, I do also think it is a more advanced way of making comics. 

So! With my comic project being a “pilot” project of sorts for helping me learn how to make comics in general – combined with how I personally love the intimacy thought balloons can add – I decided to make use of them in The Harbinger’s Path. Maybe this will change in future pages, but for now, I think this was the right choice for me, and for the pages so far.